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"Noooo, guys. Please don't tickle me! This is one of the lowest forms of torture!" Raven cried out wriggling on the floor trying to, at the very least, sit up. Unfortunately for him a weight had accompanied his waist and he was reduced to his squirming. "This is unfair!"
The goddess like woman cupped a hand to her mouth giggling into it as she made herself quite comfortable along Raven's legs. "Oh stop complaining Raven. You've been pouting all day and that's not like you."
Raven frowned as a long droning whine escaped his lips leading into words, "I have my reasons and you should know that!" Again he tried to sit up only managed to hover his torso in the air for less than a second before bumping it back to the floor.

"Raven stop struggling or will we just have to take extreme measures and restrain you to the floor?" Kate snickered enjoying his wiggly body trying to shift Reindal's form off of him. "If you keep at it, the rope around your wrists will start to rub."
"Untie me then-" He jumped in reaction to the first touch as Reindal had ran a finger down his side. "D-Dohon't! Reindal, please!" His worried expression was now wide eyed with fright as a tint of red hit his cheeks.

Reindal cooed softly as she continued her infectious giggling, "When you look upon your friends seeing them so damper and down, you feel you want to do everything for them right?" When looking upon Raven's face, his reaction seemed to confirm the statement. He was bright enough to hang from a Christmas tree.

His other young friend smiled discarding the footwear from him, "So we're going to do everything in our power to see you smile again little birdie." She held his big toes in place waggling them back and fourth. "Awww, such cute toes."

What sounded like the shrill shriek of a girl the poor boy jerked almost banging his head on the floor. "Noho! Kate, don't tickle my feet! I'm begging you. I just need time. I'll be fine!" He groaned trying to see around his imaginary made friend to see the attacker, but being in such a position prevented him from doing so.

Reindal cheered out, "Come on Kate. Get them. Tickle those little piggies." This did frighten Raven as he pulled and thrashed to get his feet out of the two little witches' reach. Hands held fast along his ankles from the blonde beauty, of course she would be able to feel his attempts to flee.

Fingers danced along the tips of his toes, caressing them quite lovingly causing the lad to choke out frantic laughter. His head rolled around the floor, side to side as he wrenched at the bonds keeping his hands together. "Nooohohohohahahaha!! Pleeehehehase stooohohop!"

The young lady with the spectacles grinned in a cheeky fashion, "Oh Raven, I've barely started. We're here to make sure you forget your troubles, even if it's just for a moment, alright?" Her fingers continued but this time she thought to pull out the big guns and began to dig in between the squirming digits.

A burst of energy shot throughout Raven's body causing him to buck upwards from the electric like feeling, his mouth gaped open wider, gales of incoherent words with outgoing laughter was all to be heard. His thrashing and bucking was nearly enough for Reindal to lose balance, but she was sure to keep a steady hold. His squeals were piercingly loud as his cackling was never ending.

This was putting his two tormentors into a chuckling frenzy of their own as the torture continued. The fingers pulled away and began to trace down the arches before digging in once more. Tears were stinging the boy's eyes; the noises coming from him didn't even seem like any noise he'd make before as he strived to plead to them both for mercy.

Reindal turned with a quick spin facing the giggly flushed male and wiggled her fingers threateningly, "Now lets find that little bunny hole!" Raven had always known what that meant which only put him into a more hysterical fit forcing a scream which sounded like the word no. The blonde tippity-tapped her fingers along his bare belly circling his navel.

Each touch from foot to torso was sending convulsive shivers along Raven's body as the tears rolling down his cheeks. He couldn't beg, he couldn't squirm because of the build up of fatigue, he was doomed to these two evil girls. It was only minutes afterwards he realised they'd stopped.

Reindal smiled down at him patting his belly, "How you doing there, little bird?" Her smile wasn't that of torment or devilishness, but that of kindness. The dark haired boy panted heavily, his stomach heaving up and down.

"Y......You....two are m.....mean," he wished he could rub the wetness from his cheeks, he hated the feeling of wet beginning to dry on his face. He found himself being pulled upwards so he sat up to view the room along with just one of the tickle fiends. He was surprised to feel arms embrace him softly, a hand tracing his back to relax him.

"You do too much for us Raven...you support the ones close to you anyway you can, but now it's your turn." A tussle of his hair was felt, the cold glass over Kate's eyes brushed over his left ear as she rested her head on his shoulders. "Sometimes the best way to let out your feelings and feel that warmth of happiness is getting a helping hand from your companions. Giving people time only has its chances of making you feel worse about yourself and we don't want that. We're your friends Raven. We won't let you get like that." The girl pulled at his cheek. "Even if it means using some persuasive treatments on you."

Raven huffed out air throwing his head into Kate's shoulder; he'd finally caught his breath and though exhausted a smile spread across his lips, "...Thank you....Thank you so much. You really are a true friend."
This is a gift I written up today for my good friend ~RavenDrakil.

Unfortunately Raven was quite down, and I hated to see him like that, so I written up this inspired little story.

Me and his character Reindal tickling him until he's happy~ XD

Hope everyone enjoys. If you wish to know more about Raven's characters. Have a look in his gallery. =3

Reindal, Raven Drakil © ~RavenDrakil

Me, © *HomunculusLover
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:icongothrockangel:
gothrockangel Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
... AWWWWWW!!!!! This made me really happy!!! Yato and Hiyori (Snuggy Alt) [V1] 
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Flakchen Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011  Student Digital Artist
awww :giggle:
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gelendra Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2010
This is pure sweet friendship and affectionate tickling! I love it! My fav kind of tickle story!
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:iconhomunculuslover:
HomunculusLover Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you. I'm glad you like it. X3
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TMZCor Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010  Professional Writer
The paragraph starting with "A burst of energy" is flawless. I will try not to hate you, but it may take me some time...

There.


"Little bird" is sweet too. I got a lot of mileage out of labeling a couple of fairly typical SoCal dudes as "rabbits". Being viewed as a pet by something bigger and way too amused just drives us bros crazy.
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HomunculusLover Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohoho? Us bros huh? How adorable. ;D Little dawg!

hate me? Why would you ever hate me? I'm sweet and innocent...and...and I just can't say that with a straight face. XD
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cocoasmile100 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010
Oh My Cows and Guarders

This is better than anything I could ever write, even better than the Carmel Pecan Cheesecake I made for my three characters, but this is better

I-MUST-BOW-TO-YOUR-SKILLZ
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Stalker5999 Featured By Owner May 6, 2010
You are a devious pair you and Reindal...I aprove lol Sir drakil needs more smiling time methinks with his chums ^>^
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:iconhomunculuslover:
HomunculusLover Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahah, we can't resist. When me and Reindal are together, it's just fun to torment him. X3
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Stalker5999 Featured By Owner May 19, 2010
I have noticed though one must be warry, Reindal does like to take charge and "torment" anyone about, even assistants, as it twere
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HomunculusLover Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh of course. =3 Though Reindal seems to enjoy helping me making Raven suffer under ticklish influences a lot of the time. >=3
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Stalker5999 Featured By Owner May 22, 2010
That seems to go without saying, methinks her reasons tis mostly for all the time he gets her as it twere..
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RavenDrakil Featured By Owner May 10, 2010
You too Stalk!? O.O Why everyone thinks I need this treatments? *thinks* I'm beginning to think that people likes seeing me tortured <_<
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Stalker5999 Featured By Owner May 10, 2010
Well admitedly you do tend to have a depressed feel unless you are dishing out these "tortures" to others, "all is fair" as they say lol

and tis only "Torture" if you count it as such ^>^
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RavenDrakil Featured By Owner May 13, 2010
B-but...! *thinks* I only aplied the tickling torture part to those who enjoy being tortured...

Aaaand, you mean...this is not torture from your point of view? O.O;; *hides you* don't say that next to Reindal! She won't have any regrets in tormenting you if she hears it.
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Stalker5999 Featured By Owner May 17, 2010
Then your difficulty tis the fact you let yourself be more clouded by woe of being "helpless" and "Defenseless" then alowing yourself to enjoy the "care" your friends give you. your eally need to work on such

Meep o>o' well not too much if it tis given reason I surmise..Besides tickling tis hardly the least of miss Reindals tortures, as it twere..Your time in that outfit at first twas an example
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RavenDrakil Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2010
It's not the first time I have been told that, I guess old bad experience can make stuff to be looked with bad eyes.

Oh, but I have come to wear that outfit well enough, at least there is people who think like that. And thanks to it the domme methods series is going on.
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Stalker5999 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
Quit well indeed, plus you rather have the legs for it lol!
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RavenDrakil Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010
Oh *blushes a bit* hehe,thank you Stalk.
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theunknown1 Featured By Owner May 6, 2010  Student Digital Artist
This is a nice, sweet little story - I'm sure he'll love it :D! Also, you should make other short stories like this sometime ^^...
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HomunculusLover Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well I always hae story ideas a buzz in my head, I just rarely have the time. XD I'll put some more up soon. X3
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theunknown1 Featured By Owner May 22, 2010  Student Digital Artist
I know the feeling - college has sapped a lot of my time for drawing ^^;. Glad to hear it; I can't wait :D!
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georgemiser Featured By Owner May 5, 2010
tickling can make anyone smile!

+ the laughing heals too.
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:iconhomunculuslover:
HomunculusLover Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Of course. ;3 Glady ou get the idea. X3
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georgemiser Featured By Owner May 20, 2010
Yay laughing! :D
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Yumeshunketsu777 Featured By Owner May 3, 2010
Maans, Raven-donos is shooo shuper luckies >///////<

I...I...I mean O///////O *goes a bright crimsons red*
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:iconhomunculuslover:
HomunculusLover Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahaha! Awww, glad you think so. I don't think Raven finds himself so lucky. XD
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Yumeshunketsu777 Featured By Owner May 19, 2010
W...W...Well ...I...I say he's luckies because....I...I wike....to be twickled.. >//////< *swishes tail*
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Gokan1690 Featured By Owner May 3, 2010
Awww!! Kate I wish I had friends like you! D=

Raven you better treasure her!

Good story Kate :)
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HomunculusLover Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*blushes* Well, thank you very much. X///D
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Gokan1690 Featured By Owner May 28, 2010
You're very welcome :3 Seriously though Dx I wish I had friends like you!
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RavenDrakil Featured By Owner May 3, 2010
Oh my!! KAAATEEEEE!! *shakes you* how could you upload this?!? X////D

I really don't know what more I can say hun, you already know how I felt both when you and Reindal did that and when you shown me the story. You are awesome, as evil and mean as Reindal but awesome XD *pulls you in a tight hug*

Hehe, I assure you that I stopped thinking about what troubled me during the torture, I couldn't focus on anything else than the laugher XD

And you think so good of me Kate as it can be easily seen in the story :blushes:

Thank you Kate :hug:
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HomunculusLover Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm thrilled you ended up enjoying this Raven, but you inspired it all. I really wanted to do something to make you smile and I'm glad I suceeded in that. =3 You're my friend Raven and I'll support you no matter what. ;3
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RavenDrakil Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2010
I know hun, you are always there when I need it *hugs tight* thank you.
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HiddenFruit Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
lol, LOVE his opening line. It is indeed one of the lowest forms. XD Even with the love in there.
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HomunculusLover Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahah, I thought I'd introduce the torture immediately. XD
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ZhaneAugustine Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
awwww really cute
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:iconhomunculuslover:
HomunculusLover Featured By Owner May 3, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks bud. X3
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ZhaneAugustine Featured By Owner May 4, 2010
anytime!
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LycanthropAsh Featured By Owner May 2, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great story Kate ^^ Really nice of you
I'm sure Rave will ike it =]
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:iconhomunculuslover:
HomunculusLover Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you hunny. X//3 Glad you like it.
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ChrisTheKitty Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
Cool Story,Looks awesome. =)
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:iconhomunculuslover:
HomunculusLover Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you. =3
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ChrisTheKitty Featured By Owner May 19, 2010
Your welcome. =)
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LovingDragonBabe Featured By Owner May 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
omg dejavoo much *icantspellgetoverit* for me this has happened *glares at tara and DeAn*
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NishiChan Featured By Owner May 2, 2010  Student General Artist
awww how sweet good job kate
and I'm sure Raven will love it =3
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:iconhomunculuslover:
HomunculusLover Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much hun. Hope you're doing ok. Don't see you on msn. =3
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:iconnishichan:
NishiChan Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Student General Artist
I'm doing alright
just busy busy busy lol
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wild-blank Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
cuuute~ X3
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gaarasgirl999 Featured By Owner May 2, 2010  Student Writer
Awww, that's so sweet x3

Raven was down?! D: That's not good!
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