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"Noooo, guys. Please don't tickle me! This is one of the lowest forms of torture!" Raven cried out wriggling on the floor trying to, at the very least, sit up. Unfortunately for him a weight had accompanied his waist and he was reduced to his squirming. "This is unfair!"
The goddess like woman cupped a hand to her mouth giggling into it as she made herself quite comfortable along Raven's legs. "Oh stop complaining Raven. You've been pouting all day and that's not like you."
Raven frowned as a long droning whine escaped his lips leading into words, "I have my reasons and you should know that!" Again he tried to sit up only managed to hover his torso in the air for less than a second before bumping it back to the floor.

"Raven stop struggling or will we just have to take extreme measures and restrain you to the floor?" Kate snickered enjoying his wiggly body trying to shift Reindal's form off of him. "If you keep at it, the rope around your wrists will start to rub."
"Untie me then-" He jumped in reaction to the first touch as Reindal had ran a finger down his side. "D-Dohon't! Reindal, please!" His worried expression was now wide eyed with fright as a tint of red hit his cheeks.

Reindal cooed softly as she continued her infectious giggling, "When you look upon your friends seeing them so damper and down, you feel you want to do everything for them right?" When looking upon Raven's face, his reaction seemed to confirm the statement. He was bright enough to hang from a Christmas tree.

His other young friend smiled discarding the footwear from him, "So we're going to do everything in our power to see you smile again little birdie." She held his big toes in place waggling them back and fourth. "Awww, such cute toes."

What sounded like the shrill shriek of a girl the poor boy jerked almost banging his head on the floor. "Noho! Kate, don't tickle my feet! I'm begging you. I just need time. I'll be fine!" He groaned trying to see around his imaginary made friend to see the attacker, but being in such a position prevented him from doing so.

Reindal cheered out, "Come on Kate. Get them. Tickle those little piggies." This did frighten Raven as he pulled and thrashed to get his feet out of the two little witches' reach. Hands held fast along his ankles from the blonde beauty, of course she would be able to feel his attempts to flee.

Fingers danced along the tips of his toes, caressing them quite lovingly causing the lad to choke out frantic laughter. His head rolled around the floor, side to side as he wrenched at the bonds keeping his hands together. "Nooohohohohahahaha!! Pleeehehehase stooohohop!"

The young lady with the spectacles grinned in a cheeky fashion, "Oh Raven, I've barely started. We're here to make sure you forget your troubles, even if it's just for a moment, alright?" Her fingers continued but this time she thought to pull out the big guns and began to dig in between the squirming digits.

A burst of energy shot throughout Raven's body causing him to buck upwards from the electric like feeling, his mouth gaped open wider, gales of incoherent words with outgoing laughter was all to be heard. His thrashing and bucking was nearly enough for Reindal to lose balance, but she was sure to keep a steady hold. His squeals were piercingly loud as his cackling was never ending.

This was putting his two tormentors into a chuckling frenzy of their own as the torture continued. The fingers pulled away and began to trace down the arches before digging in once more. Tears were stinging the boy's eyes; the noises coming from him didn't even seem like any noise he'd make before as he strived to plead to them both for mercy.

Reindal turned with a quick spin facing the giggly flushed male and wiggled her fingers threateningly, "Now lets find that little bunny hole!" Raven had always known what that meant which only put him into a more hysterical fit forcing a scream which sounded like the word no. The blonde tippity-tapped her fingers along his bare belly circling his navel.

Each touch from foot to torso was sending convulsive shivers along Raven's body as the tears rolling down his cheeks. He couldn't beg, he couldn't squirm because of the build up of fatigue, he was doomed to these two evil girls. It was only minutes afterwards he realised they'd stopped.

Reindal smiled down at him patting his belly, "How you doing there, little bird?" Her smile wasn't that of torment or devilishness, but that of kindness. The dark haired boy panted heavily, his stomach heaving up and down.

"Y......You....two are m.....mean," he wished he could rub the wetness from his cheeks, he hated the feeling of wet beginning to dry on his face. He found himself being pulled upwards so he sat up to view the room along with just one of the tickle fiends. He was surprised to feel arms embrace him softly, a hand tracing his back to relax him.

"You do too much for us support the ones close to you anyway you can, but now it's your turn." A tussle of his hair was felt, the cold glass over Kate's eyes brushed over his left ear as she rested her head on his shoulders. "Sometimes the best way to let out your feelings and feel that warmth of happiness is getting a helping hand from your companions. Giving people time only has its chances of making you feel worse about yourself and we don't want that. We're your friends Raven. We won't let you get like that." The girl pulled at his cheek. "Even if it means using some persuasive treatments on you."

Raven huffed out air throwing his head into Kate's shoulder; he'd finally caught his breath and though exhausted a smile spread across his lips, "...Thank you....Thank you so much. You really are a true friend."
This is a gift I written up today for my good friend ~RavenDrakil.

Unfortunately Raven was quite down, and I hated to see him like that, so I written up this inspired little story.

Me and his character Reindal tickling him until he's happy~ XD

Hope everyone enjoys. If you wish to know more about Raven's characters. Have a look in his gallery. =3

Reindal, Raven Drakil © ~RavenDrakil

Me, © *HomunculusLover
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gothrockangel Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
... AWWWWWW!!!!! This made me really happy!!! Yato and Hiyori (Snuggy Alt) [V1] 
Flakchen Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awww :giggle:
gelendra Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2010
This is pure sweet friendship and affectionate tickling! I love it! My fav kind of tickle story!
HomunculusLover Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you. I'm glad you like it. X3
TMZCor Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010  Professional Writer
The paragraph starting with "A burst of energy" is flawless. I will try not to hate you, but it may take me some time...


"Little bird" is sweet too. I got a lot of mileage out of labeling a couple of fairly typical SoCal dudes as "rabbits". Being viewed as a pet by something bigger and way too amused just drives us bros crazy.
HomunculusLover Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohoho? Us bros huh? How adorable. ;D Little dawg!

hate me? Why would you ever hate me? I'm sweet and innocent...and...and I just can't say that with a straight face. XD
cocoasmile100 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010
Oh My Cows and Guarders

This is better than anything I could ever write, even better than the Carmel Pecan Cheesecake I made for my three characters, but this is better

Stalker5999 Featured By Owner May 6, 2010
You are a devious pair you and Reindal...I aprove lol Sir drakil needs more smiling time methinks with his chums ^>^
HomunculusLover Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahah, we can't resist. When me and Reindal are together, it's just fun to torment him. X3
Stalker5999 Featured By Owner May 19, 2010
I have noticed though one must be warry, Reindal does like to take charge and "torment" anyone about, even assistants, as it twere
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